Explain to what extent the technological advancements derived from the First Industrial Revolution impacted the socioeconomic status of the Bourgeoisie in Great Britain using the Luddite movement to demonstrate a consequence due to the change.
Decent Topic Sentence for History Extended Essay?
It's not too narrow, just too long.
Luddites were working class, not middle class, so that part has to go.
'To what extent did technological advancement during the first Industrial Revolution effect the socioeconomic status of the British Middle Class?'
Sounds better and gives you more scope.
